I kind of really love this. I love the time at which you began the story - midway through an argument? Instead of just showing us from the beginning. And the last line is fantastic. I want to know their story, I want to know more about them and who they are
《elision: acols》is a selection of silly stories written in high school. as expected of high school angsty writing, it starts off pretty appalling. stick around to see if it gets better!!!! ..or just skip straight to 'A Moment Alone', nothing else is worth the attention.
(uploaded as a 'comic' cos the novel function is too limiting.)
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