Going Out
Aug 27, 2019
After not being able to sleep the first night at Ken's house (I named the truck driver), Augustine decides to take matters into his own hands the following night.
Also, if you get this far, I want people to lay their opinions on the art for this series. After sending me the page earlier today, Tiva expressed that he was feeling down about his work and wants to know where he can improve. I don't have the eye of an artist and I love what he's done so far. However, surely, there are others who can see things I don't. If you can, leave your critiques o Tiva's art for me to see so I can send them his way.
Thank you.
ScribbleJay
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Wish I had some feedback to give Tiva, but this art is really fantastic. The colours are great and the line work is great. There’s a few panels where the hands are ever so slightly off but I’m really grasping at straws here. I’d say the art is the strongest part of this comic for sure.
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Art, colors and lettering was done by Tivayuan (https://tivayuanportofolio.tumblr.com/?og=1)
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