Nice work! The evolution of this is coming along nicely. Something to consider: you might want to slow down the pacing. Honestly, just a little "3 months later" at the top would really make the flow smoother. Unless, of course, you want this relationship to develop quickly. In which case, please ignore my advice XD
A series of "scientific" notes and studies on the budding relationship between a gentleman and a young mermaid. Now the question is... can science have a romantic happily ever after too?
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