Chapter 1 Test
Oct 05, 2019
This chapter is just a chapter to post so I can get feed back on things I can be doing better, This is the first chapter of the story regardless.
ANY AND ALL FEED BACK IS WELCOME!!!!!
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Unless this is what your going for, Ungi's arms are smaller/shorter than they could be. Other than that just keep going, the more chapters you do the better.
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