I still really like how this page came out. the framing and shot compositions are very nice and focused. the angles show off your perspective skills very well! I still very much enjoy your brush for backgrounds. it's very chalky, but still smooth! it gives the backgrounds some kinda soft focus that I think works very well! it gives off a feeling that I can't quite put my finger on. like a calmness? a stillness, for lack of a better word.
the water fountain is very well rendered too! I appreciate the thought and detail that you put into the water alone, making it feel very much alive. you can tell there's motion to it!

and I'd be a criminal to not mention the windows revealing the starry night sky on the last panel. wonderful use of colours and brushes! it looks like a still summer's night
speaking on details? I really like the lettering used here as well! it's very clearly written with nice handwriting, and the layered yellows makes it look like the letters are made of shimmering gold/brass. plus they pop super hard off of the darker blues, blacks and grays that makes up the rest of the page. very strong start to Patchwork!