I really like the look of the water beast! I think you told me it was called a Bloorp, yeah? forgive me if I got it wrong
it's still a very interesting design and idea for a cryptid! I love the sunken, dark eyes with the tiniest glints of light staring from the holes. it gives it a terrifying look

the angles are very dynamic as well! they're composited very well, everything is communicated clearly, and I really like how the text warps around! the choice of sound effects is really fun too, I like seeing how you write them

I like how Boots looks scared and confused at this creature, and I really enjoy the details you added to make Boots look soaked by the creature, what with the very shiny hair and the dripping skirt. it's good to see her try and defend herself as well!
her poses are nice and expressive, and I really like how she's shivering on panel 3. the confusion and fear is drawn very well on that page as well!

the water effects are great too! I like how much detail you've put into capturing the water just right, and how a creature that size would interact with it. very excited to see this weird water cryptid again!