Oooh, so like an internship??? Interesting. One thing that would make this a bit easier to understand is titeling your pages in a way that helps the reader understand which page goes with which storyline.....unless im the only one getting confused in certain parts.....lol. Either way im interested to see where the rest of the story goes!
The Eye of the Desert...
A huge fog with a hole in its center surrounded by lightning.
This phenomenon holds many mysteries, which a certain man, Dr. Gutenberg, wants to research. So he decides to gather people with special powers. And that's how our 5 heroes meet!
Will they be able to find out what lies in the Eye of the Desert? No one knows what the future holds for them, but one thing is for sure: Their journey will be a kick-ass adventure!
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