Much like Helena here, I may have gone overboard with the fire. You'll have to picture the building gradually catching fire instead of instantly immolating, if you want realism.
Me, I'm trying to teach myself to finish pages and move on. This is the end of the first scene, which in my script takes up a little more than one page out of 24. Looking good for my plan to get the comic down on 100 or so pages right.
Helena loves books, girls and her cozy old jean jacket with deep pockets full of things. Tortured by bullies and unwanted everywhere she falls into a Faustian bargain, of sorts. And she has to find out just how much she's willing to sacrifice for power, and if there is a place for her in the world; if she deserves to live, or love.
Content warnings: Child abuse, self harm, mass murder, nudity.
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