The Cube, The Scrapbook, and The Ancient Dragon PGS 3 & 4
Jan 30, 2020
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Do you think my dialogue's too "Wall of Text-y" here? I've been trying to find ways to trim down the dialogue for my comic so it doesn't come off as too exhausting, so please let me know if you have any tips on how to trim things down.
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By the way, if you have any constructive feedback on how I can improve in art direction and style of the comic going forward along with writing, formatting, or anything else, please feel free to comment below! :)
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