I like the action and how you showed the difference in power between student and master in the beginning.(cool stuff) Only criticism I think is more of a me thing...Maybe a bit more background art(environment) could help with story telling too. Not just in slower scenes, but in action scenes too, even if that sounds like more work. I am looking forward to more!
Series about a young Swordsman who seeks to become the #1 Swordsman in the world, he only has 100 other Swordsman to get through and evil forces looking to utilize the World's Treasures for nefarious purposes! Join Tetsuzan and his friends on their adventure to become the #1 and discover the secrets to the Immortal Blood!
Comments (2)
See all