Chapter 03: Pg 10-15
Jul 24, 2015
I'm sorry if some of the comments don't make much sense. I've updated the chapter pages as I've been editing the crud out of them and this has led to some slight dialogue changes. I'm really sorry if you've commented on content that has been edited and now has to be read out of context.
I'm extremely grateful to all your comments as it has given me priceless feedback that I can use as an author and story creator. Keeping your comments is the reason why I refuse to delete these chapters and simply post them all brand new.
Thank you for understanding :)
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