Episode 1 Page 9
Apr 14, 2020
After many rewrites, finaly Yukari arrived in the story and is here to stay :D
Feuersichel
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This is a really nice redraw. I enjoyed the humor on your first take thoug. Especially the beginning pages. But this gives a more depths to his character and how he grew up. Also I like those perspective-shots, it makes the scenes more interesting. The only thing I noticed were some grammar-errors in the erlier pages. Do you have word? I use this to correct my mistakes.
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