Okay, I love the flow of the panels, and I love the character interaction. This went a lot better than the first episode, but, your character stating he is dead and then seemingly being take aback from it is a little awkwards. Other than that, excellent job. I shall move on to the next episode.
Despite not having any aspirations for it, Saleh, streetsmart scoundrel, is forced to become an adventurer. Will he become a genuine hero, or maybe he will find a way to go back to his old habits?
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