the beggining: part 2
May 14, 2020
this took too long lmao
Lunarsun
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The story seems to start in the middle of something. This can be really good, but right now ...it just makes me feel like I am missing a part of the story and I need to go find it. I think a title page might help, with some idea of a passage of time ...like the Stacey looking at picture of her friend and being sad because of it. Something to make it feel like Stacey is in a bad situation.
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