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52 Weeks of Morning Thoughts

WEEK 7

WEEK 7

Jun 21, 2020


i tried to pull apart my strings

as i listened to him sing

eyes drawn to his voice

fingers lost from the noise


when the last note lands

i suddenly looked at my hands

all my efforts led to naught

all i saw was a thousand knots


fingers interlaced with his

promises of do, re, and mis

i succumbed to the melody

unable to unweave myself free


perhaps his sirenlike words

with my heart’s impossible chords

lulled my mind to count the sheep

and made the loops begin to creep


call it brave or call it luck

i fought to dance myself unstuck

twirled away from an encore’s beat

and closed my ears from its repeat

motokane
yuki motokane

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it’s a day late :( but it’s longer than usual :) please let me know your thoughts!

#poetry

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GrotesqueIce
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I like the musical themed analogy. I think this person is in a toxic relationship she cannot escape from or rather does not want to escape from it.

Every time she would pull away, her partner would do things to make her stay. Which is kind of sad but to each their own right?

Nevertheless, I loved it. Keep it up! :)

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