Palm trees are hard, they are!
Love how you're not afraid of testing a bunch of styles and techniques within the same chapter, switching even from one panel to the next. Such endearing inconstancy.
Got one small complaint regarding this the text in between the palm trees, though: font size might be big, huge even, but it's not enough to redeem and make legible the black-over-dark-green writing. When the background is dark, please switch to a light color for the text.
Aside from that, I burst out laughing when reading the "Our secondary protagonist" bit. T'was... unexpected.
Keep it up!
Ah, the country!
The perfect place for a young couple to get away and start their life together, but what mysteries await them on the ancient grounds of Turkey's Landing?
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