Ch 2 Page 22-24
Jul 04, 2020
This is so very late but Chapter 1 is finally done!!!! Please let me know what you think so far of the story. There will be a bit more action later in the next chapter.
alanalsjun
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I had to read this a few times to even understand what was happening. I liked the beginning of the comic. It seemed like it was really going somewhere but by page 15 it was a chore to read. The fonts and the color scheme. There's hardly any details in the bubbles. All i know is this kid is 12 and he's some kind of contract killer?? Does the rat talk? There's weird guy in his living room or on video chat. Honestly im not sure who/where he is and why he wants eyeball teeth. This is not something i'd read in the future. Its so chaotic and confusing. However, I did enjoy the colorful panel on page 21 that was so refreshing as well as the art style of it as a whole. (uptownhoney)
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