All of these pages were uploaded separately, but they have been condensed into one episode to match my current upload format. This way there won't be a weird shift between episodes 3 and 4 like there was before. Thanks for reading <3
Hello! I’m Choco from the forum and I’m here to give you my opinion for your comic! Interesting premise you got there! I see that your character’s anatomy seems a bit stiff. Don’t worry; Clip Studio Paint or MagicPoser could fix them if you want a model to help with posing. Your expressions looks really good; no need to polished them. The panels comic’s panel outline is really thicc; but that just my style to prefer manga-like panelings. Be careful of pacing though; if you have time, get a writer to help with how the story flows. Overall; good job with the first chapter! :3
Rin Nizu is a lonely high school girl. She wishes she could have a cat, a friend, parents who are actually present in her life, anything! But after getting powers from a cat and meeting the vigilante group Cat Club, it seems like she might have a chance at not being alone anymore. The only question is, how far is she willing to go...?
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