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Jul 26, 2020
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All of these pages were uploaded separately, but they have been condensed into one episode to match my current upload format. This way there won't be a weird shift between episodes 3 and 4 like there was before. Thanks for reading <3
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Hello! I’m Choco from the forum and I’m here to give you my opinion for your comic! Interesting premise you got there! I see that your character’s anatomy seems a bit stiff. Don’t worry; Clip Studio Paint or MagicPoser could fix them if you want a model to help with posing. Your expressions looks really good; no need to polished them. The panels comic’s panel outline is really thicc; but that just my style to prefer manga-like panelings. Be careful of pacing though; if you have time, get a writer to help with how the story flows. Overall; good job with the first chapter! :3
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