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Aug 31, 2015
This is the last page where they're kids. The prologue itself still has a tiny bit more to go though.
Also, yes, this story isn't completely straight faced serious. But did you really expect it to be from me? I mean my main inspiration for becoming a writer is a gag comic artist. XD
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On the planet Toberetz there are two types of people. Both are humanoid and nearly the same but have different abilities. These abilities aren't anything crazy but are noticeable. One group of people can control their extremities durability allowing them to strike with lots of power and are typically lighter skinned and the other group can call on what are essentially hormones and can increase their overall strength and speed and typically darker skinned.
I want to point out some things as well that the story isn't about races though, more about classes. The rich and poor both share equal amounts of both types of people.
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