Chapter 1 Ep.3
Sep 17, 2020
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Okay, I've read all your episodes so far! First off, I really like your color palette! The comic has a good color tone to it, I like it a lot!
You also did a good job establishing that this is a world where magical creatures exist, although I wish there was a little more exposition with regards to who those knights and red bearheads were. I suppose since this is still in the early stages of your story, you'll properly show them soon, right?
I also think you should maybe spend more time repeating the character names just so that readers more easily understand who each character is. For example, I know the main character's name is Lars, but I had trouble remembering the little girl's name was Lara, because you only mentioned it once in the entire story so far.
Your story is interesting, I'm looking forward to finding out what happened to Kiora and what was up with those knights and red bearheads. I subbed to it, can't wait to see the next episode!
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