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The Girl Who Rang the Doorbell

Chapter 6.1 - Open

Chapter 6.1 - Open

Oct 24, 2020

 It's been one week since that day. I haven't seen that girl again. And about my parents... Of course they came back, just really late on that day. I'm sorry if I scared you.

Anyway, I decided to finally call that number that she gave me.

The call was answered just before the fourth ring. So I knew I was calling a good professional.

- Hello?

- Hello, good afternoon. Umm ... am I calling the [telecommunication company] sales department? - I asked, wondering why they didn't introduce themselves when answering the call.

- Good afternoon, yes you are in fact calling the sales department ... But there is a small problem. You are not calling the department itself, but just me, who works here. Who am I talking to?

I introduced myself, and asked, what she meant by that.

- Well, you're basically calling my personal number. Are you contacting us to talk about our services?

- Yes, I needed some information about that.

- But then who gave you this number? I don't give it to anyone related to work... Only if it's... - replied the woman, first in a tone of visible confusion, but then seeming to come to a conclusion.

- Who gave me the number was your colleague Andreia. She showed up here a week ago, and was supposed to come again, but I haven't seen her ever since.

After I said this, the woman went completely silent for a while.

- You talked to... Andreia? - she asked, with a shaking voice.

- Um, is there a problem? - I found her reaction strange. But what is going on here?

- Well ... you see ... Andreia has not been in the company for some time ... unfortunately. - she said that last word very quietly, but I could still hear it.

- Well, then who did I talk to? Someone who pretended to be her?

- I don't have many details, but I can tell you something about this... You will have to promise that this stays between us.

- Okay, I won't tell anyone else.

- Actually, this is the third time that someone calls, saying that they spoke to Andreia. Do you happen to live in the center of this city?

- Yes, I do.

- Yeah, all the calls so far came from there. That was the area that Andreia was covering, you know.

I remained silent, waiting for her to keep talking. I think that, if she works in a certain area, the calls coming from that area is a completely normal thing, right? But in this case it doesn't seem to be. Thinking about this, a shiver ran down my spine.

- But the strangest thing is that, until now, people who called because of her, always called the company number. This is the first time someone calls my personal number...

- I see - I replied, when in fact I couldn't see anything

- Can you tell me your street and building number, if you don't mind?

- Look, I honestly have no interest in your services anymore - I replied

- Ah, yes, I understand. But it wasn't because of that. It's just for me, because I'm concerned. You don't need to tell me the apartment number though.

Ok, I gave her the address.

Now I feel like I'm going to meet this person soon. Maybe when I'm least expecting it.

- Did you open the door for Andreia? - she asked, suddenly. - I mean, of course you did, if not, you weren't going to call me. I wanted to thank you for doing this. Thank you!

- You're welcome. - I replied with a smile - I was a bit lost at first, but now I think I understand it. I'm glad I opened the door, to the girl who rang the doorbell.

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Maksym Aguiar

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#first_chapter #Suspense #mystery

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When a stranger rings your doorbell, do you usually open it?
In this short story, we follow the narrator, a relatively egocentric and very much spoiled young man, who doesn't want to open the door to a woman who appears to be doing door to door sales.

About one hour after she rang the bell, he decides to check the door again, and is surprised to see that the girl is still there, immersed in the silence of an empty corridor.

He asks himself if she has been standing there all this time, and starts wondering: Is it best to ignore her again, or just open the door for once?

Read the funny thoughts and scary moments the protagonist lives in this very weird afternoon of his life.

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Author's notes:
Updates every Tuesday and Saturday.
The next chapter is already out on my Patreon, if you want to check it out early.
The full story is also on my Patreon.

I originally wrote this story in portuguese, so if you prefer that language you can find the story on Wattpad and also Patreon. Click the link bellow or search for "A Rapariga Que Tocou à Campainha".
I translated the story to english, and this is the first time I'm doing this, so if you find any mistake, let me know.

This is just a short story, but still, it's my first story. Hope you enjoy!
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