Prologue
Oct 14, 2020
Sarah McSquish
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You have a very interesting premise! Your series reminds me of soul eater in the school's design; I could see this as another anime show. I would suggest keeping your fonts the same when characters speak. The font changes halfway through a word bubble, and it feels odd. Also in the final text box, it says "mt parents" instead of "my parents." Aside from that, great job! Keep up the good work!
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