0-The Opening
Sep 28, 2015
The Unexpected Start for the Young Saquire
I DON'T KNOW HOW TO COMIC ACTUALLY HAHAHA
so freaking inconsistent //cries//
Please do leave a crtitque or something... I really need some
T-thank you for reading :3
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I like the concept. The biggest thing that stands out for me is the text. Some I have to work at reading because the words are hard to make out. Someone better at typography might be able to explain it better.:) There are portions that the letters are so thin, I think the compression is distorting it. This distortion makes it difficult to make out the letters and I would encourage using thicker fonts.:)
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