I love the drawing, the hair, and poses especially, however, You might want to work on your spelling. There were places I couldn't understand what was being spoken. Another point to add is when the character is sideways, the words should still be facing up. Other than that I love it, and can't wait to read more!
See, she is a new girl who came to our school.What do you think that you go to her and get to know her? Or better go with her to a date.Keep it simple is not it? . . Wrong because of this date, you have entered the real hell.Welcome to the deep web.The place that you will enter and not leave except for the dead...( #tapas )
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