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May 07, 2021
Creator
Hi, it’s the author! This is my first webtoon and I have absolutely no idea what I’m doing because I have never made a comic before. For now, please forgive the art because I don’t know anatomy or how to use my art program very well - I will improve with experience. Thank you so much for reading! ~Nova
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Hello! I’m Choco from the forum and I’m here to give you my impression of your comic! Nice first chapter! I love that the backgrounds art is very detailed and feels very much like you worked really hard on it. I would like to point out that your anatomy is isn’t very proportional. Try MagicPoser if you’re having a difficult time with different perspective and poses. The writing is already very good; so no need to work with a writer. Overall, interesting premise. I love the shattering glasses at the bottom, it adds to the dramatic nature of the scene. Alright that’s all I notice. Good luck with your future updates! :3
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