Goodbye, Rival
May 11, 2021
This is the first comic I've published! what do you think? we'll be happy to hear any and all criticism!
written by: https://twitter.com/AwesomeSmileyF
with art by: https://www.instagram.com/inertia_artist/
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I like the emotion and the nice angled shots. I'm assuming the style/outfit change indicates a time lapse of many years, if you make a much larger break between those pages or possibly even a dialog box telling us how long it's been that would make it more obvious. Other than that great comic!
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Goodbye, Rival
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Shiro is an energetic martial artist with a big heart whose friend was corrupted by power. He'll do whatever it takes to show him the light, but can you change someone that doesn't want to change?
A short fantasy comic written by:
https://twitter.com/AwesomeSmileyF
with art by:
https://www.instagram.com/inertia_artist/
This is a one-and-done thing, so don't expect any more episodes!
A short fantasy comic written by:
https://twitter.com/AwesomeSmileyF
with art by:
https://www.instagram.com/inertia_artist/
This is a one-and-done thing, so don't expect any more episodes!
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