I don't mind the change at all! There's always room to improve :3. Though- just a suggestion, not trying to be rude- maybe you should make the speech bubbles bigger, or shape them according to the words, because I noticed that some of the writing leaked off the side of the speech bubble. Just a little improvement can make it look a whole lot nicer to read! Not that I don't like reading it, of course ;3
Melancholy (Mel) is kind, soft spoken and completely oblivious to all things flirtatious. He's also a demon, That's the problem. Mel doesn't like his job and he has seemed to give up all hope until he meets a beautiful, kind and slightly feisty angel named Adonael (Don). Together they embark on an adventure in the pursuit of a new life, a change of fate, and maybe even a little love on the way. With its ever present comedic undertones Crowns & Collars is a wonderful story with lovable characters and beautiful art.
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