So as much as I really hate to do this, especialy since I've finally started sharing my stories. But I'm going to discontinue this story for now. I can't get into it nor figure out how I want things to play out. I do have many many other stories for you all to enjoy. the two here that I am updating and a few I am in the process of writing. what I can do is give a brief paraphrase of things that would have happened in this story, and I do still plan to do a Q&A so ask any questions you want. There is a reason I don't feel I can finish this to the best of my ability right now. So heres the paraphrase of events.
The group had to wait a week to board the ship back to their country. While waiting they worked some more one their Magick.
Once they got back to their country they had to tavel through two more villages before they go to the village of Antonio and Mae's home, they then headed right to the library and the room holing the books they needed and found a few that the homes didn't have. They found that the Dark World was once a bright world full of loving people. a worls almost exactally like theirs. In fact it was a copy of their world, said to have peoples doubles. So that ment that the people in their homes could very well be them, just the them from Dark World. The book said that this other place corrupted the the core of the planet/world. The corruption of the core is what made all the people pf the place evil.
Knowing what they needed to do now, they did research until they find a way to get to the Dark World(haven't figured that out yet.) once there they need to find the way to the core(havent figured that out either) they do run into trouble on the way to find the core, but they also meet the few good people left in the world, those people help them. They make it to the core after some time and use Spirit to heal the core of the world, which in turn heals most of the people of the world including the ones who have crossed over to their world. The people who helped them get to the core then help them get back to their world.
To their surprise everyone who came over from Dark World was healed, everyone that is but the ones who took over the castles. those that were healed decided to help the ruling family from this world to battle the ruling family from their world. They said that while they were strong, the kids nor adults bothered to practice much with their magick, and that they weren't sure if they were exactally like them.
They find they do have some of the same powers as them but not as strong as themselves, big battle ensues and lasts for hours, but our lovely sets of twins win the battle. The four had hoped they would have been able to bring their parents back to life, but it has been much too long and it was now much too late. The duos got married right away, and within a year had sets of twins of their own, two sets of male twins, both sets identical.
As I said. I still wan to do a Q&A so i'll answer any questions about the story, myself or even the characters, and once again, I apologize for ending it here, maybe once day ill revise and repost. Until then I will set this as completed.
This is the story of four people, two pairs of couples, who go on a mission to find the cause of the untimely aging and deaths of their nearly immortal people.
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