Ch 1 P3: Just an "ordinary" student
Mar 12, 2022
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This style of comic isn't where my expertise is, but I think the main cnc I could give is there's a lot of text.
Example: 'Who do you think I am? James bond? I am a hero, not some kind of soldier, who will follow the governments orders like a damn puppy...If you think I would accept this miss-'
VS: 'Who do you think I am? I'm a hero not a loyal lapdog. If you think I'd accept this miss-'
Just something for the future. For now the story seems decent. Though it's hard to judge paneling and composition for me, as I mostly read vertical comics.
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