Hi! I recently found your story and I've been enjoying it quite a lot so far! I hope it's ok if I leave a bit of constructive criticism. I wanna start off by saying I really enjoy your comic style. I think the art looks amazing and it's very fitting for the story 😊 with that said, I find it a bit hard concentrating on the plot and the story itself because it's only a page per week and it kind of kills the suspense because, as readers, we don't really get there and just see a page of panels. As a reader, I really wouldn't mind slower updates with more pages so I can really get on that suspense/horror mood going and actually feel the chills 😊
Nyctophobia, or the extreme fear of the dark has plagued me for most of my life. This short graphic novel depicts my deepest fears about what possibly lurks in the dark.
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