Another girl! I really can't complain 😌 One thing, "his" means "belonging to him" while "he's" means "he is". I can't tell if you care but mistakes get readers out of immersion. You keep asking for feedback, what can I do xD But aside from that, I dig the story and characters 🥰👏👍
In a world where humans finally bridge the gap between what’s natural and what’s supernatural A program is created called the Paladins program for men and women around the world, The best of the best can become a Paladin to protect those that can’t protect themselves. Denji Crown, son of one of the Strongest Paladins was kidnapped at a young age. After finally being discovered six years later he awakens with only one goal, To find his father.
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