Latertale
Jan 01, 2016
The story begins...
Feldiarts
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to give some honest critique that may help you on your way as a Comic artist: you still need to learn a lot. When you look at the feet of the left person you see that the shoesoles line up to each other which would be an error in perspective (I hope that is right). to fix this you'd need to draw the shoe that is in the backgroung just a little further up. also I'm a bit confused with her legs: the line that should part the legs starts more like in the middle of the upper leg and the position of the bellybutton also seems a bit weird. I hope that you aren't mad about my advice, because I really just want to help. Keep drawing! Because you only can get better <3
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