The First Day - Part 3
Jun 05, 2022
I'm still working out how ham-fisted I need to be to explain the more unique concepts within the world. Might go back and do some clarity edits if people don't understand what the thing in the glass vile and what its used for in the world.
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Hi, I just made an account SOLELY to say that I really miss the art style of the older comic. Even though that one had no color, the characters were vibrant and original looking. This now just looks like any other web comic :/
Looks like the story is still progressing good, and it has me engaged, so it's not all bad. I don't think I'll be reading any more though. The "fast pacing" issues have become slow pacing issues
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