here's another thing instead of using "it is" you can put "it's" and the spelling should be "with" but it's okay , I just wanted to tell you all that so you can improve more, but I like where the story is going
Moving can be a hard time, even if you are used to it, changing schools and leaving friends. But what if you meet someone interesting, what if they are hot?
What if they are interested in you too? OoooOOOoo,
what will happen in this story, where 2 hot girls meet? oooOOOOooO.
The sweet taste of love, also its gay so what can go wrong?
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