I really dont have a plan for this story, you guys get the general plot I talked about in the begining but thats all i have planned, so any comments about characters, skills, story progresstion is a help.

Please tell me off if the storys going too fast or slow aswell. man im stuck i wanna say more too you bhys but my brains not working. 

So yeah to sum it up you bhys can control the direction and characters in this story i might even and ranom people who are subscribed in aswell, the only thing in wont change is the revenge bit. But you can change how it happens for ex i plan on added romance later with the girl Luke is planning too steal from his brother, you can chose whether or not he's become a lovesick puppy for her or is obsessive. ive rambled on long enough i hope you enjoy my first ever novel :)