Something a little different this week! I've been getting the feedback that the story is a little difficult to follow, so I've included a deceased character's notes on the witches of Humors in-between the first few chapters. I've also changed some of the dialogue in the first few chapters that was a bit clunky and now doing double duty with the notes. Scroll back for gory exposition and smoother talking!
Four kinds of venereal magic circulate in the underbelly of Paris. They flow through dark corners and pool in the places where people gather to meet unseen. To the ambitious and the marginalised, their power is well worth the cost- but as with most things in human nature, things are messier than they seem. Witches, as it turns out, play dirty...
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