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A lot to say about this one but very hard to... Well starting with the lighter stuff a bunch of super impressive and gorgeous looking backgrounds. I love the controlled clutter feel of the supermarket very naturalistic even if you are insane for that it definitely does look better for being individually drawn like that. The kitchen also has some lovely details, I think your wavery lineart style looks extra good with this, that oven is especially cute.
In terms of the meat of stuff, for a start that tension between Aiden and Onyx at the beginning is so well expressed. There are a bunch of great expressions, and the lyrics layering over it along with being generally applicable to their music taste and themes of the series are a nice foreshadowing of Onyx's horrible terrible day at work.
First we have Dom! Having another not fun time. I do love the way you introduce characters, even if I didn't know uh... Some details about this lovely fella, Dom's reaction alone is enough to tell you something is fucked here... (Btw ... Important question.... Red or yellow)
Aiden, Onyx, Dominic and Covin are four losers in their mid-20s content with just getting by. Saddled with present adult obligations and weighed down by past childhood traumas, they desperately try to live their lives while keeping a Pandora's box of long-buried secrets from ruining what little joy they have.
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