Black Rose: Epiphany of The Rose Ch.9 Pg. 2
Feb 06, 2023
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The gangsters confront Rose about the commotion she caused, threatening to kill her. Alexandre intervened by throwing a bottle at the club's sound system, giving Rose time to snatch the gangster's gun and shoot at them. She was ready to fight.
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I really love it when you add more information in your Artist Comments. I wonder if you're able to insert some of the into the character's thoughts so it can lead me (the reader) into the action and more into the characters' personalities.
You did fantastic with the gangsters--their thoughts and action were expressed very well.
Maybe with Alexander getting ready to throw the bottle, we can hear his thoughts of his concern over Rose being in the line of fire.
Maybe your not doing this is your style? But it's just an observation.
To tell you the truth, I don't like giving advice or opinions to creators of their comics because it could cause discouragement or backlash. However, in your case, I think it'll be something you can think about--accept or not accept. Still, your story is wonderful! :) Keep up the fantastic work!
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