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sogonolo

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aaand that's it! it is donee. let me know how you interpret this story below ;DD what will happen to eolyne? is mira actually dead?? is shell being honest??? what do you think? (((:

this was my first time making a comic, so i'd really appreciate any and all feedback pls and ty ((,: AND if you're interested in seeing what will create in the future, subscribe! I'll post announcements of future projects here ;D

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realityking

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crazy how underrated this is. the story is real captivating man, i would love to learn more about this world; it's a shame that this page marked the end of the story. also, the panels, dialogue, and overall format of this comic are so easy to follow along. last thing: the art is just beautiful. your art style is very pretty and nice to look at. It’s just magnificent. and the cover? i was just scrolling through comics on here with no search filters, so most of the comic covers seemed pretty mediocre. when i saw this one, i was blown away. the cover art is freaking heavenly, for lack of a better word. it's the best one I've seen by far. you know, it’s hard to believe this is your first time making a comic. amazing 👍

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Defectum (short story)

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The date of Eolyne's big Test is approaching. To combat her nervosity she wanders down to the lake to clear her head... little does she know that someone is watching her from the water. (short story)

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Character pronouns:
Eolyne: she/her
Mother: she/her
Shell: they/them
Mira: she/they

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