Harsh Reality
Mar 05, 2023
A boy and his father face their first mission together against some town rebels! But little did the boy know how hard It actually was compared to how It looked...
Lupine
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Long comment headed your way—heads up!
First off, I’m going to start with your characters. Their expressions—chef’s kiss, dynamic! First impressions, excellent!! I mean, you’re not a literal sword but you could be one with how well you’ve executed it ;) Also, like I can see their personalities and it deepens the bonding moment between Miles and his dad—which I adore so muchhh!!!~~~
The character designs are also incredibly well done! My tip for that though is to utilize shapes! You did a good job especially with the villains, but to both I would give more sharp angles to give more of a ‘warning’ look! The action scenes—I can’t start because I will never be able to stop about how well these are done. Perspective, expression, AHHH!!
Also can I just say again I adore the bonding moment between Miles and pops? (His dad is also really cool)
Overall you’ve earned a sub! Also one last thing while I’m at it. Backgrounds. You did them beautifully! I absolutely love them—but I would make the lines thinner in the back just so we can get a better sense of what’s farther! Utilize air density (Things get lighter farther away) and line weighting! Good luck and craving more!
-Lupine!
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