Chapter 3 - Na Roda
So I know I said this about the last chapter too but I was worried about this one. I'm not sure how readable the action is, and since I completed this chapter in Jan(?) I've written a lot behind the scenes about how the martial arts would work with the elements going forward, so things might change again in chapter 5. Either way, I hope you all enjoyed this chapter cause I enjoyed drawing it. Future uploads will be fewer pages at a time and you know where to go for behind the scenes
Another great chapter. Genuinely wonderful work on this comic, Onti is beautiful to read. It's very exciting with the action but the more "quiter" scenes are really soothing too, really relaxing. It's really professionally done, the traditional page layout has been preserved but you made it really nicely readable on a mobile device as well. Thank you for this comic!
Best friends Keisha, Aariyah and Jaylin’s lives are disrupted when a gang wreaks havoc within their community using enhanced elemental abilities. Despite juggling work-life struggles, the trio seek to fight back using their elemental capoeira skills to put a stop to their crimes!
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