I loved how you gave little personalities to each of Penina's Pokémon! I also liked the artwork and I noticed that the style changes a few times, which I found very entertaining (I liked how the style varied a little bit). I think the pacing of the story could use some work. It felt like I was just constantly getting washed into different character introductions and battles. Overall, I think this is well done. Great work!
Professional shut-in Penina Wynn is forced to venture out of her comfort zone when faced with one simple task: Complete the Alola Island challenge and document what she learns. Along the way she’ll meet friends, family, challenges, and dangers she never imagined before. But what happens when she gets wrapped up in a plot involving sacred figures, a runaway girl, and a legend about the moon?
(Based on a Pokémon Moon Nuzlocke)
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