So by now you should be starting to be able to guess where this story goes. Not to shout it out or anything, but I know when I look out at the audience and see the lightbulbs going on.
I can't claim to love this page. Talking heads. Not quite sure about how I would have actioned it up, but as I've already got some mental notes about revisions, maybe I'll revisit it. Or maybe I already did if you're reading this weeks after it was written. Stealth edits, the webcomic creators friend.
Come back next week for Jack's second day on the farm.
Monsters, fairies, wise old women and hapless young lads and lasses, wandering storyteller Bertram Talespinner shares his take on stories from near and far.
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