Chapter 3: Prologue Conclusion
Feb 29, 2016
Next chapter concludes the intro/prologue to Maximum Chaos, I am so ready to get going with this story you guys! I have been working hard writing it out and everything! thanks so to everyone that has been hanging in there for this chapter
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Yo I came to take a look at your comic, sorry it took so long, there's a lot of submissions on the forum, but I will start saying your effort shows itself.
but the history is really interesting, it's also very messy in its exposition, there's too much text on the screen and sometimes it doesn't really make sense so you should double-check your dialogue. The amount of panels is also impressive, but it makes your comic hard to read and it doesn't flow very well, I think you should take a look at other comics and how they handle panelling.
I really like the covers, you can tell there's a lot of work and effort on them, and they flow really well, the character designs and postures are great as well, that kind of energy is what you should translate to the comic itself, overall I really like it, you did a great work and put a lot of effort on it, give these pages are very old now I will check your most recent work :D
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Art by: Danita Sibert
Story by: Danita Sibert & Sherretha Sibert
Editor: Sherretha Sibert
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