001: Victim
Oct 21, 2023
Leaky Sponge
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THIS IS PEAKKKKKKK LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOO!111!!!!!!!1!
Those 2 months were worth it all the way through. The anatomy, hands, props, expressions, and backgrounds are all PUBLISHER WORTHY. You took that coolness from the last panel of Chapter 1 and then turned it into an entire chapter. Colouring this would be an actual nightmare (in a good way). I literally have nothing bad to say about it, except maaaaaaaybeee Vern's design. She isn't too memorable. Writing-wise, the premise itself is a wee bit generic, but I found myself enjoying it anyway. The weak spot is mostly the world-building since the rules and character points in this world are pretty scattered around and stuff, mostly because I feel like there isn't enough stuff or/and it being one sided. However this is still chapter 2, so you can't set everything up in a few chapters. So I just wish more diversity in characters and stuff if you can do that :)
Can't wait for the next chapter in 2026! /DFLA
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Contains MAJOR SPOILERS for the remaster, read at your own risk.
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What’s the point of mourning about the dying world, when its society has already collapsed? A sanguinary battle between the remains of mankind and a seemingly invincible threat: giant entities roaming around, destroying so much in just a few minutes. As Rua struggles fighting them, questions about their origins start to appear.
Contains MAJOR SPOILERS for the remaster, read at your own risk.
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What’s the point of mourning about the dying world, when its society has already collapsed? A sanguinary battle between the remains of mankind and a seemingly invincible threat: giant entities roaming around, destroying so much in just a few minutes. As Rua struggles fighting them, questions about their origins start to appear.
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