Mush13
Oct 25, 2023
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Switching from slice-of-life and informative/sci-fi, to action is slightly difficult. I feel I could of added one-liners and cooler scenes, but my mindset couldn't switch off the earlier parts...
Also shouldn't be laughing, but imagining people getting high during a fight was somewhat funny.. Might've got ...strange ocer the years, that wasn't funny when I first wrote/read it
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