After finishing Chapter one, I'm mesmerized by the colorful art and how nice the design of the characters is. You also managed to convey a sense of the magic of this world through showing in a magnificent way.
I think the only area for improvements I would say were the clunky dialogues at times. They don't feel very natural in some parts, like the very beginning. Also, some of the panels could have gone without the text, let the great art carry the work.
This is all just my opinion, of course. But I think you are up to a very strong start with this one.
When young Veronica saves fox spirit Aramis, she wishes for him to be her friend. No book or training could prepare her for the whirlwind of consequences that entail! There’s no shortage of supernatural shenanigans in the Etherwood – the forest that borders life and things beyond.
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