002: Slave
Nov 25, 2023
Leaky Sponge
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TW// some guy being way too excited about a amateur webcomic
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GRAHH I STAND CORRECTED
Comparing this to other chapters is like comparing Peak to a masterpiece holy shit. The art style has involved beyond human comprehension, the font has soul, and the pacing is...get this...GREAT omfg. I have so little to say about it because all of its flaws are fucking gone from the last time. Cover art? Insane. The very sketchy style? Enough to be quirky. Dead expressions? Gone. Sound effects? Amazingly drawn. God I can see this being the start of some amazing story that gets a huge fanbase that devolves into a controversial fandom because of the AUs and fanart.
The ONLY bad thing I can say about it is the establishing panel of the environment, where it kinda looks messy. I think you should work more on environments and giving lighting to this black-and-white comic. The shading also dropped by a bit. probably due to the shorter time span of drawing this.
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Contains MAJOR SPOILERS for the remaster, read at your own risk.
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What’s the point of mourning about the dying world, when its society has already collapsed? A sanguinary battle between the remains of mankind and a seemingly invincible threat: giant entities roaming around, destroying so much in just a few minutes. As Rua struggles fighting them, questions about their origins start to appear.
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