PHEW just about got this finished! Thank you again for reading!
I am away next week, so luckily I finished this on my last free day :D
First ever short story, and I am definitely learning a lot. Any feedback is very welcome!! Some of my main takeaways are:
1. I need to buy a drawing tablet at some point, drawing on mouse and keyboard is relaxing but soooo slow!!
2. Write the dialogue first maybe? I found it kind of weird to draw the art first and write the words second, and I think at points that makes it kinda clunky?
3. Work on pacing. I think even for a short story, its too quick near the end.
ALL THAT BEING SAID, I am very very proud of myself for finishing this and working within a deadline! It's not perfect but I have no regrets! I hope you enjoyed my little goblin story, hopefully more to come in the future!
(once again, any advice or criticism very welcome! I am proud of my work, but I do want to improve, so everything helps!)
I think this short story is set in your current ongoing series The Adventures of Chicken and Waffles and it looks interesting, though it spoils your upcoming chapter.But iam okay with that.
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