Originally, this scene took place right after the first second chapter's arguement and was a convo between not just Peppermint and Korsica, but with Macaron and CNMN too (the "anti-consumer" line was originally CNMN's LOL). I was going to cut this scene from the story entirely, but I decided to repurpose it into another scene with just Peppermint and Korsica to give some context into what exactly is wrong with Chai's arm. In a way, it is a little bit of a shorter 'exposition the chapter', but I thought it'd be nice to check in with the others after being with Chai for two chapters.
When Chai is threatened with losing everything he's built up after becoming Vandelay's Ambassador, he's put at odds with his friends. Instead of accepting his horrid fate, he decides to take his own path… or is it?
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